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I just finished writing my essay and I don't know if we had to make the essay on a different topic because I won't lie I had to read what we had to do a lot of times so I'm pretty much assuming that we have to make the essay based on the topic that we have been doing for the past couple weeks and the topic that I have been doing and I'm actually enjoying because I'm learning something new and the topic I'm doing is video game addiction and how it will increase in the next couple years.
I watched all the videos on the page and it opened me up on how to write a better essay I tried to apply what I learned from the videos and I'm not going to lie to myself I still got ways to go but I do believe that my essay writing has gotten a bit better and will get better the more I do it thanks to watching those videos.
I realised that the essay can't be boring or just a whole summary of what I have been talking about for the past couple of years and I approached it with a new way I just went and talked about what I wanted to talk about I didn't have an introduction I just went ahead and didn't stop, I really talked about my opinion on video game addiction and how it will it increase and how it is creasing and how it is effecting children today in this society.
I also went to compare how young people that are growing up in this generation and on how children growing up in the 70s, 80s and 90s were completely different and how more active and social kids where back then, I also went to talk about how video games and being surrounded by them to much especially at a young age will affect a child life.
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